Written Audience Feedback

As well as getting video taped feedback of my magazine I also had a couple of my peers given written feedback, this was in the form of both bullet points highlighting key points and annotations of a printed out version of my magazine.

Here are some of the changes that were suggested:

• Make Band name more noticeable and appealing
• Make band name more 'snazzy' and less like the other text on the page
• Make sure the design of the sell lines match e.g. the red stroke on the boxes surrounding them
• Add image of front cover on to contents page